That World Up there
That World Up There
Those fairies’ tales I used to be told,
Does their world actually exist?
I often wonder what lies beyond,
Hidden behind that mist!
Does their world actually exist?
I often wonder what lies beyond,
Hidden behind that mist!
The solitary wafts floating by;
Is the solitude illusory?
Perhaps that is where the Lilliputians dwell,
All moving about in a flurry.
Does Snowhite live happily with her prince?
Or does she lay poisoned till date?
Has Rapunzel finally found her love?
Or sheds tears over a gloomy fate?
Is the world happy out there?
Or are the bright-ends yet to arrive?
Of this world I’ve dreamt so much,
No longer do I want to stay naïve!
Shall travel far and find that Beanstalk,
Which must have shot up for sure.
Climbing it, the clouds I shall dock,
And discover the pristine world of lore.
‘Pristine’ did I say? ‘Pristine’ did I mean?
I think I’m now in a fix!
Cruelty of a king, malice of a queen,
And the ‘guilelessness’ of a witch who plays tricks!
If no difference between this and that,
Then why am I curious so?
Perhaps the mists, which obscure it all,
Have made me so ardent to know!
by Mridu Chadha, 3rd june 2006
Is the solitude illusory?
Perhaps that is where the Lilliputians dwell,
All moving about in a flurry.
Does Snowhite live happily with her prince?
Or does she lay poisoned till date?
Has Rapunzel finally found her love?
Or sheds tears over a gloomy fate?
Is the world happy out there?
Or are the bright-ends yet to arrive?
Of this world I’ve dreamt so much,
No longer do I want to stay naïve!
Shall travel far and find that Beanstalk,
Which must have shot up for sure.
Climbing it, the clouds I shall dock,
And discover the pristine world of lore.
‘Pristine’ did I say? ‘Pristine’ did I mean?
I think I’m now in a fix!
Cruelty of a king, malice of a queen,
And the ‘guilelessness’ of a witch who plays tricks!
If no difference between this and that,
Then why am I curious so?
Perhaps the mists, which obscure it all,
Have made me so ardent to know!
by Mridu Chadha, 3rd june 2006
96 Comments:
At 6:38 PM, Ménk said…
badhiya hai. not bad at all.
i like poems written by ppl i know. it's good to see thm express something in poems. they cud b about firy tales or about thmselves. it's good to read all the same
At 10:06 PM, Anonymous said…
rather childish.needs improvement though well begun keep it up..
At 10:33 PM, mridu said…
how sweet of you to approve of it. its just what i so yearned for... monsieur anindya!
and of course, under your guidance i shall certainly improve...
At 10:52 PM, Varenya said…
Too Good!!!
At 11:23 PM, Monica said…
Very very nice, I am proud of you Mriduli!!
The world of fairy tales,
Is created out of our imagination,
Though it provides much joy,
And often great fascination!!
But its a tale neverthless,
So lets leave it to that,
There's much to ponder about here,
So many battles to combat!!
At 6:18 PM, Akshay Sehgal said…
truly amazin..i relly cant believe its u whos writen it ;-)
but seriously..gud job!!
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At 11:22 PM, Anonymous said…
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At 8:19 PM, Anonymous said…
Hey gud work yaar..
very well written....
At 2:59 PM, Anonymous said…
lovely poem yaar...
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At 11:39 AM, subbu said…
Fairies apprear &
Fairies disappear -
Floating through dreamy tales.
'Ethreal and untrue',Mom says.
The tribulations all around,
The Joy unbound -
The movement of the life's wheel
Any more real?
At 11:07 AM, mridu said…
Why, isn't that the reason,
fairy tales are told?
To guide us through,
to help me and you,
to look forth into the future.
To never-say-die, to continue,
and not be bogged by the blue.
courage, daring, optimism and bearing,
to reach the awaiting future.
a future of brightness
a denouement immersed in bliss,
that's where all fairy tales reach.
to fight hard, to overcome hurdles,
that's what the fairy tales teach!
At 10:19 PM, Anonymous said…
Yes Mridu, you are right!!
Its easy to sink into the blue,
Easy to blame me n you,
But to go on even when it seems futile,
Surely shows your mettle true!!
If fairies can find that eternal happiness,
Then why not you and me,
So lets fight with all our might,
And craft our own destiny!!
At 2:14 PM, Ménk said…
"as seems the theme here
i will use it too
poetry comes from the soul of women
but men have hearts too
poetry is a beautiful art
not all know how to use it right
if used correctly though
it can impress the best of minds"
dumb as i might have sounded, this was an attempt to fnally bring forth the rhyme in my words. sry to disrupt the gr8 string of poems going.
At 1:33 PM, Anonymous said…
meank,
Your little attempt at poetry is not dumb at all,
Put a little more of soul, and you too can surely enthrall!!
A few feelings that come straight from heart,
Well, that's what adds to this beautiful art!!
At 5:41 PM, Ménk said…
tht's soo good. ma'am, i can never do tht! i'll try later tho.
At 1:47 AM, Ménk said…
dude, long time....whn will u blog nxt??
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wen's the next post coming..
(i used to drop in time and again at ur blog.. long since i saw u writing?? )
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